Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through internet, and they can study just well at home. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is the mandatory part of the life and demand of this modern society. Being educated means an overall development of a human socially and mentally. Mode of education also has a vast role in building up an educated individual, the most common and familiar is school.
Schools are the basic, traditional and an effective mode of spreading light of education. In the history of the thousand years schools are the best in teaching knowledge as well as the moral values to the pupils.School makes a pupil ready for his future with positive attitude and skills to survive in the challenging world. In addition to it person becomes competitive and adjustable.
On the other hand with the advent of the computers and internet the education system has modernized. Already computers have replaced the books up to great extent and next target seems to be the schools. Moreover now days education is much more easy and with the authentic knowledge and the whole credit goes to internet.
However without school it is hard for a pupil to get proper knowledge of the survival in the society. The real scene of learning competition and hard work can be played with proper direction in the schools only. Furthermore without school a student can study on internet and become a knowledgeable man but its impossible to become a successful gentleman.
Considering the matter in fair light the advancement and need of computers for study can not be doubted, the role of schools is also indispensable even in this modern world. Discussing the fact, internet is an e-world in other words an imaginary world.
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