Shopping is dangerous because it makes people selfish and careles with money.
Do you agree or disagree?
In modern society it has become popular among people share experience about ways how to establish and choose their own image, style, clothes they wear during daily routine. That fact created several problems to people particularly who are attracted by shopping centers to most. As all of us know, clothes are one of the necessary things which people should care about. However, there have been some accidents when human beings has begun selfish and forget about their money resources.
In my opinion, In general, shopping influenced on people positively because it could be a hobby, or people can combine some leisure activities with process of buying clothes as well. For instance, shopping usually improve a mood of people by bringing them some additional certainties. Also, people feel comfortable by wearing convenient clothes so that it helps them improve their entire personality.
To opposite regards, shopping might be a dangerous and harmful habit for many people all over the word. People should be always keeping in mind that shopping effect on funds and some physiological aspects directly. It always tries attracts humans in order make them purchasing its good or services. People can forget about as their available money easily in such ways as other aspects of live.
To conclude, shopping is one of the most popular habits among all of people and it could cause some negative effects. However, if person logical and clear-minded such activities have only a positive effect on people. They can share time with friends and do shopping at the same time as well.
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Sentence: It always tries attracts humans in order make them purchasing its good or services.
Description: The fragment order make them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: in order to do sth.
Sentence: However, if person logical and clear-minded such activities have only a positive effect on people.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to person and logical
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