should teenager study all subjects at school or should they concetrate on one subject they are best at or find intersting ?discuss both sides and give your openion.
Nowadays,the spread of schools are more than in the past around the world.In devlopment countries more types of schools are availble such as scinces,art and music rather than poor nation,which is has maximum two kinds.I belive that strongly studying specific fields is better than general subjects.This essay will reveal tow sides of methode for learing either study one subject or more than one.
As for study one subject,this way will aid students to foucs on one subject,therfore understanding all aspects of this subject.This is appear in private schools, which is provide you more choice to selection;for instance,when study computer then studendt will know all things about hardware,design and software,also how can be repaire it.Morover,once want to study in University he will continue in same fields that will help him because he has good background.
Some subjects need learning from begining when the student was child such as music,so the rich countries are established privite schools for this purose including music equipments like pieano and recording machines.if we focus in one subject we will get expert genration in more fields.
There are some advantages in study more subject for teenage students.First of all,we can determine which subject this student is intersting to.Secondly, avoid any worng specialist selection,which is lost the time.Thirdly,give student more chance to test this subject and assess all positive and negative sides.I think studying one subjet will aid student,also his country to devlopment in the future.
Sometimes,most country preferrd studing one subject,but this way costly because its need specific type of teachers,which are experts in their fields.In conculsion,the future for the people are specialized in their field.
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- Family is considered the most powerful inflence in child's development.However,some people think that other factors play a bigger role in his/her devlopment.To what extentdo you agree or disagree ? 43
- should teenager study all subjects at school or should they concetrate on one subject they are best at or find intersting ?discuss both sides and give your openion. 55
Sentence: This is appear in private schools which is provide you more choice to selection;for instance, when study computer only then studendt will know all things about hardware, design and software, also how can be repaire it.
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Sentence: Sometimes, most country preferrd studing one subject, but this way costly because its need specific type of teachers, which are experts in their fields.
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Sentence: In devlopment countries more types of schools are availble such as scinces, art and music rather than poor nation, which is has maximum two kinds.
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