In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
In this modern world , people have no time for themselves. They intend to utilize their time as much as they can without giving any privilege to their health.
The most important cause for depreciation in health and lack of fitness is the ignorance of the people. They have time to their work and indulge themselves in improving their performance at work place . Due to lack of time ,they prefer more package food and fast food over the home cooked food .These package food and especially fast food contain lot of calories which leads to increase in the body weight.Furthermore, the work of this mo...
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These package food and
These package food and especially fast food contain lot of calories which leads to increase in the body weight.
should be : 'fast foods contain' or 'fast food contains'
Sentence: These package food and especially fast food contain lot of calories which leads to increase in the body weight.
Description: The fragment food contain lot is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace contain with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
flaws:
No. of Words: 287 350
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.944 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.143 7.5
Don't leave a blank space before punctuation marks.
Leave a blank space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Characters: 1444 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.031 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.516 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.944 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.143 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5