Some people argue that companies and private individuals not governments should pay the bill of pollution clean up To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people argue that companies and private individuals, not governments, should pay the bill of pollution clean up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some views, cooperates and entrepreneur are supposed to allocate their profit in environmental cost. I tend to agree with this statement in that they should have taken the responsibility for the impacts from their activities, but in other viewpoint, the government should manage the pollution in the country because those companies have fulfilled the requirements needed to do their activities.

Nowadays, the business sectors are growing up in some countries. They explored and exploited the natural resources in lots of areas. In fact, those activities are the aspects that give impacts to the environment such as water pollution, air pollution, land contaminated and produce many wastes. Therefore, the companies and private individuals should have an environmental policy and environmental management plan to prevent and reduce the damages of the environment. In other words, they also have to share their cost in environmental part.

Nevertheless, the government should take the responsibility to overcome those environmental problems, due to the companies and entrepreneur had the agreement with the government to comply with the environmental regulations. There are many ways to maintain the environment, for instance by conducting the corporate social responsibility program. Still, the business sectors must pay the taxes to the government in addition for their awareness in the environmental aspects.

To sum up, not only the companies and private individuals that should take the role in protecting the environment, but also the stakeholders that is to say the government. They are might to take each portion as a team to minimize and manage the natural assets in tempting the environmental sustainability, indeed.

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not only the companies and private individuals that should take the role in protecting the environment, but also the stakeholders that is to say the government.
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Sentence: To sum up, not only the companies and private individuals that should take the role in protecting the environment, but also the stakeholders that is to say the government.
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