Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others believe that children shall work/think independently . discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents , of course, have a lot of experiences to give for their children, so the children should obey their parents. But some people see that it is better to leave children behave independently. My point is: should new generation follow their parents (on every situation) and (for ever) ? in this writing I will explore the two opposite views, then I will say when kids should follow their parents instructions.
There are some people think that parents should be obeyed by their offspring. May be, they think that parents know more than children and that makes kids avoid a lot of problems or da...
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Sentence: On the other side, their are minority see that parents should leave the children to behave and make their discussions freely, because kids will learn the right just when they do the wrong.
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