Some people believe that governments should spend more money on public services rather than waste money on creative arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been some arguments about money spent by governments on public services and creative arts. Although I agree that it would be better spent money on public services, there are some situations in which I disagree with the idea that to invest in creative arts would be a waste of money.
There are several reasons why I believe that governments should use financial resources in the further development of public services. There are several benefits to focus on public services. One of the most important point is education; every person needs to know how to read, write and do basic mathemat...
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