Some people believe that secondary school children should study international news as a subject. Other say that this is wasting time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The ability to catch up with worldwide news is of particular significance in this day and age. Many people claim that international news should be one of the mandatory subjects of secondary school’s syllabus while others reject this notion for some reasons. Discussed below are several factors accounting for the stark contrast between these two perspectives.
It is indisputable that this implementation would bring many benefits. Firstly, it helps children to gain social knowledge which is crucial for them in their career ladder later on. No doubt that many students spend too much time on st...
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Sentence: Perhaps it is not the appropriate time to revolutionize the curriculum and therefore, the authorities should further considerations on this phonomenon.
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