Some people believe that students should learn far more from modern technologies like the Internet and TV than teachers at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, as the technology develops, many people tend to study via modern technologies like Internet and TV rather than traditional teaching methods such as learning from teachers. They believe that it is modern technologies which helps them to acquire more knowledge. Personally, I partly agree with this idea and the reasons are as follows.
Clearly, modern technologies facilitates our study because of its abundant resources and superb accessibility. There are voluminous resources on the Internet and TV, from discussions on the BBS to the documents shared in the cloud storage, from video co...
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