The table below gives infomation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
A glance at the table provided reveals information on national consumer expenditure of different items in five different countries in 2002. It can be clearly seen that, in all 5 countries, the consumers spent the most in Food/Drinks/Tobacco and the least in Leisure and Education.
In terms of expenditure on Food/Drink/Tobacco, the percentage of consumer expenditure in Turkey and Ireland constituted the largest with 32.14% and 28.91% respectively, while the corresponding expenditure in Italy and Sweden constituted the least, with 16.36% and 15.77% respectively. However, the consumer expenditure in this category in Spain saw a morderate proportion-18.80% only.
As for expenditure on Clothing/Footwear, the figure of Italy is the largest-9.00%. In other countries, the consumer expenditure in this category only remained relatively low level at approximately 6%. When it comes to Leisure and Education, it is evident that consumers in Turkey spent more in this category than the counterparts in other countries. Comparing to merely 1.98% in Spain and 2.21% in Ireland, the consumers in Turkey invested 4.35% of their expenditure in Leisure and Education while the consumers in Sweden and Italy spent about 3% of their total cost in this category.
Generally, it is interesting to note that consumers in Turkey invested more on Food/Drinks/Tobacco as well as Leisure/Education than those in other countries, while the consumers in Spain seemed to be more frugal in all these three categories.
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Hi, I've rewrite it as
Hi, I've rewrite it as below:
"Generally, it is interesting to note that consumers in Turkey invested more on Food/Drinks/Tobacco as well as Leisure/Education than those in other countries, while the consumers in Spain seemed to be more frugal in all these three categories."
Sorry for losing "in Turkey"
Generally, it is interesting to note that consumers invested more on Food/Drinks/Tobacco as well as Leisure/Education than those in other countries...
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