Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people hold a firm view towards a mandatory punishment to all criminals regardless of the different levels of severity. Personally, I believe that under any circumstances should the rationale behind the crime be taken into consideration prior to ultimate judgment.
To begin with, those who advocate the former opinion should have their argument justified. Indeed, they consider that by dint of posing a threat to the society, every offence is suggested to be subject to a consistent execution. For instance, they must serve a certain number of years within the prison or more seriously, they ...
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