some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Globalization as a catch-all term refers to any activity that involves more than one country, such as traveling from one nation to another. Rapid increase in the transnational travels has sparked controversy over this trend. Chief among all responsibilities of the host country is how well they can control the cultural invasion which is followed by increase in the number of arrivals. Government and related authorities should clarify whether the visitors should be compelled to follow local culture or they are free to have their own culture.
By preventing visitors to follow their previous life...
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