Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others, disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this world, several people have opinion that people who visit other countries have to follow the native norms. However, there is opposite who think that people do not need to follow the local rules because the host country should be welcome to visitors.
A group of people who say ‘yes’ have opinion that every tourist should be appreciate the local tradition. Besides, the tourists should be obey the rules in which every country that they visit. For example, Indonesia where have many customs and behaviours, every guest from other countries should be respect with the local rules when they stay in Indonesia. Moreover, they might believe that it is disrespectful to ignore others tradition. Blending with another customs shows good faith and the willingness to get to know their culture. Also, the two countries might have great differences on social value as well as rules.
On the other hand, people who have another opinion about visitor that do not have to follow the locals rules as a form of cultural understanding that the host country should be welcome to visitors. Furthermore, the locals should be grateful for people who are visiting its land because the tourists can bring income to the locals. So, The locals should make their tourism is accepted to tourists that make more comfortable.
In conclusion, every people who come to other countries have to appreciate other foreign traditions. It is important that tourist is not to insult the locals since you are the representative of your country. And I believe that always open mind is the most important thing to do when people are traveling.
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Sentence: Blending with another customs shows good faith and the willingness to get to know their culture.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to another and customs
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 270 350
No. of Characters: 1312 1500
No. of Different Words: 134 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.054 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.859 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.406 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.812 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
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