Some people claim that internet-based social networking has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
There are some people believe that more negative effects would be evoked than positive ones as a result of internet-based social networking. That opinion does not have strong reasons based on facts that many advantages could be gotten from it.
The group who do agree with the opinion because the facts that some bad occasion occur as an impact of the internet-based social networking such as a deceit, a virtual harassment, a terror and bullying as well. In addition, an enormous bad influence for children will be resulted because of its pornography contents.
However, many evidences demonstrate how huge the positive effects of it. For instance, via the internet-based social networking people can easily find or to be looked for vacancies in which it will help job seekers and the companies that require new employee with spesific qualification to meet their need. Some other advantages are its use in friendship, for supporting charity programs, selling or purchasing products or services, and also share news or information. For friendship, reconnecting to the old friends is more likely to be performed through the internet-based social networking and make new relationship with the new ones as well. For supporting charity programs, the information for fund raising could be widely informed via the internet networking. In the same way, other information or news could be widespread shared through that media. Indeed, for online purchasing or selling the use of that media will be very useful for an advertisement.
In conclusion, although the internet-based social networking gives negative effects but more positive ones could be gotten from it. Furthermore, there are widely possibility to prevent or minimise the negative effects of it
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Sentence: For instance, via the internet-based social networking people can easily find or to be looked for vacancies in which it will help job seekers and the companies that require new employee with spesific qualification to meet their need.
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Sentence: Furthermore, there are widely possibility to prevent or minimise the negative effects of it.
Error: minimise Suggestion: minimize
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