Some people prefer to be in the same kind of job their entire life, but others like to change their jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When people are young, they have dream about their future life, future jobs and so far. For achieve these targets, everybody choose different paths and try hard. In the real world we have different kind of employees. Some of them have a desire to try a new job and change their jobs frequently. In opposite, some employees like to keep current job and they stay in their position until they will have retired.
Changing jobs have some advantages and disadvantages. When you change your jobs, you will have a chance to work with new co worker, and gain new experiences. Besides, you will have this ...
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