Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs.
obviously, work as regard thing in human being life because human being want to survive in this globe they ought to do any kind of work in this globe.
present in this world the human being is changing time to time because of our survival. For example you take one literate person in this time he need to do job because job is necessary for his life leading. He likes mostly his education background job he doesn't like any type of jobs because he is literate.
Lets, take another example, you take one ill literate person in this time he survives any way because he can do any type of work except related to education background jobs. Mostly he can do hard working jobs like agricultural. In this total scenario obviously any human bebing needs job.
And the other hand, every one have own hobbies and leisure interest. Some people mostly interested on hobbies because they can search their happiness in their hobbies. For example of this famous cricket player sachin tendulkar he is getting more happiness only playing cricket. Playing cricket is hobby and job also.
conclusion,people should give same importants to job and other activities. Because both are important in every human being life and every one happy with these things. Donot neglect duties it gives food and donot neglect hobbies it gives little bit happiness. In human being life each and every one is important either it is positive things or negitive things. In some situations positve gives more confidant and negative gives less confidant but both are tell how to build life.
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Sentence: obviously, work as
Sentence: obviously, work as regard thing in human being life because human being want to survive in this globe they ought to do any kind of work in this globe.
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Suggestion: obviously, work as regard thing in human being's life because human beings want to survive in this globe they ought to do any kind of work in this globe.
Sentence: conclusion is people should give same importants to job and other activites.
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Suggestion: conclusion is that people should give same importants to job and other activites.
Sentence: Because both are important in every human being life and every one happy with these things.
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Suggestion: Because both are important in every human being life and every one is happy with these things.
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Sentence: obviously, work as regard thing in human being life because human being want to survive in this globe they ought to do any kind of work in this globe.
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Sentence: conclusion is people should give same importants to job and other activites.
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Sentence: Because both are important in every human being life and every one happy with these things.
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Sentence: Lets, take another example, you take one ill literate person in this time he survives any way because he can do any type of work escept related to educationa background jobs.
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Sentence: Some people mostly interested on hobbies because they can search their happyness in their hobbies insted of their jobs.
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Sentence: For example of this famous cricket player sachin tendulkar he is getting more happyness only playing cricket.
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Sentence: conclusion is people should give same importants to job and other activites.
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