Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.
Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
One of the topics of heated debated among the experts is what effects have computers on human’s life. It is indisputably taken for granted that technology, as we all are aware and have probably experienced, not only plays a vitally significant roll in every individual’s personal and social survival, but also makes a fundamental contribution to make one’s life more convenient and improved. There are number of people believing that computers are making human’s lives more complicated and the rest are of the point of view that computers pave the path to have an easier life. Psychologists believe that computers cause stress and anxiety among the nations. I personally think it is to some extent true on account of the fact that people are getting more and more addicted to using computers.
At first glance I would like to mention speed as one of the positive aspects of computers. Computers can be considered as an inseparable section of improving quickly. Here I prefer to refer an example, all the entire companies store their data in computers as well as accounting or they do a wealth of huge projects by computers and doing all these works is impossible without computers and the ones, which are possible, will take a bunch of time to get done. Moreover Internet has a great influence on one’s life and help him to communicate with a variety people all over the world.
There is however a reverse side to this coin, those who believe computers have made life hard and stressful, commonly tend to look at the dark side. In their viewpoint spending too much time on computers makes individual’s brain tired and it leads them to the anxiety.
All in all, after all these stories, I believe that computers have made our life easier and no one should underestimate the impacts of them.
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