Some people say TV has left family members unable to communicate with one another. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific examples and reasons to explore your opinion
The invention of television is one of the greatest humankind's invention in 19th century. Some people think that the usage of television negatively affect the communication between the family members. Personally i think that watching television has brought so many advantages as well as disadvantages.
To begin with, nowadays most of the children and adults spend more time watching television than on almost any other activity. Television brings lot of benefits for us which helps the people to criticize the violence, sexism, and racism in many different programmes and helps to gain lattest n...
- Parents make the best teachers Do you agree with that statement Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer 74
- Some people say TV has left family members unable to communicate with one another Do you agree or disagree Use specific examples and reasons to explore your opinion 84
- It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents,for instance,for sport or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and 55
- Universities should provide as much money for sports programs as for their libraries Do you agree or disagree Give specific examples and reasons 71
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and other kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 75
Sentence: Television brings lot of benefits for us which helps the people to criticize the violence, sexism, and racism in many different programmes and helps to gain lattest news at a time itself through flash news channels.
Error: lattest Suggestion: latest
Sentence: On the other hand, some studies show that the exessive television watching causes some harmful effects of the people such as the impairmentof people's ability to think and imagination.
Error: impairmentof Suggestion: implement
Error: exessive Suggestion: excessive
Sentence: Some study found that addicted television viewers have a shortened attention span and lack of reflectiveness.
Error: reflectiveness Suggestion: No alternate word
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