Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of the museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of the museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Museums are places where objects of historical, cultural, and artistic interests are preserved. People have different opinions about the functions of the museums. However, I believe museums could be both educational and entertaining.

Some people argue that, museums are the treasure houses of knowledge and wisdom and therefore they should be focused on education. The traditional coins, crafts, paintings and so on, are excellent sources of education especially for students and those who want to research on them. These things broaden our outlook and give first hand information about the certa...

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Score: 8.0 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 328 350
No. of Characters: 1673 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.256 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.101 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.178 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

hello chechi it is a gud essay. congrats. gud allignment of paragraphs are clearly seen in your essay. you nicely included one idea or argument in a single paragraph,and the conclusion was all about your own idea.. that was excellent.. my suggestion is that to reduce the body paragraphs length by cutting off some unnecessary points, and provide an extra paragraph for your own idea.. and explanations.. more over only one idea and its explanation and its example is enough for a body paragraph..

anyway u did a great job..keep it up..bye