Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is generally agreed that parents should give children education about the attitude in society. On the other hand, children would acquire that information at school.

Parents should teach children about the way to be a good members of society and to create them become a good person. When children arrest the education about it from their parents, they could be easy to understand because they are able to ask freely to their parents without bashful. Children could ask specifically about their parents advice when they want to make the decision in society. However, children only earn how to be good members of society without the real practice. It simply develops children become confused about the information that they have from their parents. According to University of Indonesia research, children would understand quickly when they do practice about the education that they get from their parents. The research also says that children would get confused when they simply receive the theory without practicing it.

Not only from their parents do children learn about the step to become good members in public, but also could obtain it at school. Children could convince numerous information about it at school because they could share with their friend who have different way to be good members in the city. Children could exchange their ideas with other students about which way is to be a good person. Studying about the way to be good person in school also gives bad effect to children through not all of the students who have good attitude. Sometimes, other students who have bad attitude influence the children who have a few information about the way to be good members in society by giving the wrong information. It seems like people, in government, must have a good ability to build relationship with other politician. When they do not have that ability, their friends would influence them to be a corruptor. It means that children have to be good at in choosing the partner to prevent them from bad impact.

The main objectives from this essay are both of views have advantages and disadvantages for the children.

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