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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
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Sentence: The parent who give birth their kids is most responsible to their life and their environment.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to birth and their
Sentence: However, not only the old people in their house who have a responsibility, but also the school where parent believe that place can bring their son and daughter have a good behavior in associating.
Description: The fragment parent believe that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace believe with verb, past tense
Sentence: If there is a teacher who wrongly teacher their student, it certainly impact on their thought and behavior.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to teacher and their
Sentence: As a consequence, the parent who should more gives attention for their development.
Description: The fragment more gives attention is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace gives with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 265 350
No. of Characters: 1241 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.683 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.446 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.606 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.592 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5