Childhood is a precious learning time because kid's mind like a plain canvas what ever is written once on it remain forever.Competition play a phenomenal role in life of children however, is another line thought which adevices child is tought cooperation even it is betterment for mankind. Here, I would like to establish my points on both statements with my own view.
First of all, majority of masses assert , we are living in competitive era and feeling about competition is phenomenon but children should be encouraged to become competitive now a days huge number of sectors such as working , sports, educational and many more where competition can be seen because it makes toile hard to a offspring and it is universally accepted," hard work is keep to success" consequently way to reach top on the table. Moreovery sence of responsibility can be accomplish by compete due to the winning and losing power as well as name and fame is achieve on worldwide leave for example John sino , Sonia Mirza and gigantic workforce have popularity and glorify their on country in the whole world.
On the other hand , some proportion of human think coopration is part of our moral value which is very first lesson teach to the kids at primary academic and a child adopts verious qualities for example team work , leadership, fraternities and management there for these help to children in further life such as family , relation and other different kinds of moments so they accord cooperation is fruitful learning in child age for long live.
From my point of view, as universally acknowledged,"Wisdom is better than strength"some time we have to lose the game and another individual work there for proformance of other. To illustrate that a survey is conducted by Time magazine of India has revealed, India had losted cricket world cup in 2006 due to poor performance of one batsman consequently the team's member had to embarrassed in front of puplic so l personally faver it children should be influnced for competition because it encourages to children for succeed.
As per my above discussion it is evident , both are an important aspects of life but competition is demand of hours and has magnificent place in our life but cooperation which lucrative in adult age can adopt in young age .
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Sentence: Competition play a phenomenal role in life of children however, is another line thought which adevices child is tought cooperation even it is betterment for mankind.
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Sentence: ' hard work is keep to success' consequently way to reach top on the table.
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Sentence: Moreovery sence of responsibility can be accomplish by compete due to the winning and losing power as well as name and fame is achieve on worldwide leave for example John sino , Sonia Mirza and gigantic workforce have popularity and glorify their on country in the whole world.
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Sentence: To illustrate that a survey is conducted by Time magazine of India has revealed, India had losted cricket world cup in 2006 due to poor performance of one batsman consequently the team's member had to embarrassed in front of puplic so l personally faver it children should be influnced for competition because it encourages to children for succeed.
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Sentence: As per my above discussion it is evident , both are an important aspects of life but competition is demand of hours and has magnificent place in our life but cooperation which lucrative in adult age can adopt in young age .
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Sentence: Childhood is a precious learning time because kid's mind like a plain canvas what ever is written once on it remain forever.Competition play a phenomenal role in life of children however, is another line thought which adevices child is tought cooperation even it is betterment for mankind.
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Sentence: On the other hand , some proportion of human think coopration is part of our moral value which is very first lesson teach to the kids at primary academic and a child adopts verious qualities for example team work , leadership, fraternities and management there for these help to children in further life such as family , relation and other different kinds of moments so they accord cooperation is fruitful learning in child age for long live.
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Sentence: From my point of view, as universally acknowledged,'Wisdom is better than strength'some time we have to lose the game and another individual work there for proformance of other.
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Sentence: To illustrate that a survey is conducted by Time magazine of India has revealed, India had losted cricket world cup in 2006 due to poor performance of one batsman consequently the team's member had to embarrassed in front of puplic so l personally faver it children should be influnced for competition because it encourages to children for succeed.
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 386 350
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No. of Different Words: 233 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.432 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.776 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
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