Some people think that women should take part in the military or the police force, but others oppose to this idea. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and examples.
The topic of gender equality has become a controversial issue in modern society. Consequently, some people believe that more women should be participating in male dominated roles in the military and the police force, while others are against this idea. This essay will examine both opinions alongside appropriate examples and my personal thoughts.
Traditionally, women have been regarded as lacking the physical and mental discipline that many men posses, and as a result women have been avoiding workplaces that require physical labor and strength. Some people find this extremely inequitable, e...
- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society 70
- Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture Discuss both sides and give your opinion 86
- As child obesity becomes a serious health issue in today’s society, some people feel that TV commercials advertising junk food aimed at kids should not be shown before 9pm.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 90
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents in the development of a child s intelligence and social skills Do you agree or disagree 95
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 297 350
No. of Characters: 1504 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.151 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.768 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.918 7.5
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