Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion.

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Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion.

Skyscrapers are the sign of ecomonic boom and advancement of technology.Some belive that staying in such buildings can make people uncontented and for some it bring amny positive outcomes.However I believe that,high rise buildings will defenitly have positive effect on peoeple.

Owing or renting a space in a tall building have numerous advantages.The most significant benefit is the security it provides for all its inhabitants.To explain further,most apartment have a well embeded security system,which has the capacity to tackle and handle any issues timely.Since building of such places rely more on modern technology to offer basic gadgets neede for man.

Furthermore most skyscrapers are occupied by people from different regions .So people who live in there,getting an absolute chace to socialize and exchage ideas together.It would mean that,such interactions are paramount of new relationship,which in turn bring happiness to their life.

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Sentence: Skyscrapers are the sign of ecomonic boom and advancement of technology.Some belive that staying in such buildings can make people uncontented and for some it bring amny positive outcomes.However I believe that,high rise buildings will defenitly have positive effect on peoeple.
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Sentence: Skyscrapers are the sign of ecomonic boom and advancement of technology.Some belive that staying in such buildings can make people uncontented and for some it bring amny positive outcomes.However I believe that,high rise buildings will defenitly have positive effect on peoeple.
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Sentence: Owing or renting a space in a tall building have numerous advantages.The most significant benefit is the security it provides for all its inhabitants.To explain further,most apartment have a well embeded security system,which has the capacity to tackle and handle any issues timely.Since building of such places rely more on modern technology to offer basic gadgets neede for man.
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Sentence: Furthermore most skyscrapers are occupied by people from different regions .So people who live in there,getting an absolute chace to socialize and exchage ideas together.It would mean that,such interactions are paramount of new relationship,which in turn bring happiness to their life.
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