Space tourism Will it bring positive or negative effects on the world s development Give your own opinion Use example based on your experience

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Space tourism: Will it bring positive or negative effects on the world's development? Give your own opinion. Use example based on your experience.

It is undeniable that there are countries with technological advances which are working to be successful on space exploration. For them, this will be another form of recreation. Although I tend to believe that space tourism could have beneficial outcomes, I also think that it might affect people negatively.

There are obvious major positive impacts that outer-space recreation can produce. Firstly, in order to come up with space tourism, exploring and unraveling the hidden mysteries of the space is needed. This drastically broadens and enriches humans' technical awareness and constructive kn...

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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 297 350
No. of Characters: 1595 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.151 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.37 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.99 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.64 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

Hi sir/ma'am,
I just want to clarify about the band score you've given me. It's only 6.5, however, there are no grammatical errors, misspelled words, and inappropriate use of words seen. There are no corrections or suggestions as well. I just want to know why it is only 6.5? Thank you!

Sorry, these are the flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.64 7.5
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07

The E-rater only gave 6.0 for this essay. Human grader gave 7.5, the final mark:

(6.0 + 7.5)/2 = 6.5 (We don't put 6.75)

Since the flaws are not serious, so we didn't put them on the top. But we will investigate why there is a big gap between E-rater and human grader for this essay.

Your essay level is around 7.5 according to our experience. That is great! But to get higher marks, you will need to pay attention to Sentence-Sentence Coherence. It is low for most of your essays. There is nothing wrong with your language, but related to your writing style.

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