Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many people children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from school curriculum?
As the technology is rapidly improved, Information Technology becomes a subject that should be learned. There have been some changes on the school curriculum by changing credit study from Art, Sport, and Music into Information Technology (IT). The idea behind this is to make students stay updated to technology. Others say that IT subject is not an easy subject and students find it difficult to adapt on the changes.
Including IT as one of the subjects to learn in school has given some benefits. For example, we can see many young and rich CEOs who run start-up companies. Learning IT has helpe...
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