The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and bar chart give information of times consumption in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport networks, and the price of utilizing vary of transport in the city.
Tram, Bus, Taxi and Car are the most commonly vehicles to be used in the city. Those have changed the average journey time after improvements. Tram has shown a decrease of time consumption from 22 minutes to 16 minutes. This trend is also followed by Bus, which is five minutes faster after improvements. Taxi and Car stand at the opposite, as the data shows more time consumption than before improvements. Accordingly, Taxi is two minutes slower and Car is five minutes slower nowadays. However, Taxi and Car are the fastest way to getting around the city either before upgrading or after upgrading, while the bus is the slowest.
To get the fastest transport, passengers should pay 1.80 euro. It is the most expensive price. Passengers can save about 40% of their money if the use Car, which is just take 1.00 euro. The cheapest price to get around the city is Bus and Train, so they require less than 0.60 euro.
In conclusion, this data can be used as a reference to decide which kind of transports people may be used.
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The table and bar chart give information of times consumption in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport networks, and the price of utilizing vary of transport in the city.
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Tram, Bus, Taxi and Car are the most commonly vehicles to be used in the city.
Tram, Bus, Taxi and Car are the most commonly used vehicles in the city.
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