The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvement were made to the transport network and the cost of using different form of trnsport in the city

Essay topics:

The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvement were made to the transport network and the cost of using different form of trnsport in the city

The two charts below show the comparison between vehicles and average cost per kilometre with journey time before and after government made the improvement of the transport network.

The chart shows that bus was the longest vehicle that took 28 to 23 minutes after improvement with the cheapest cost only 0,4 pounds sterling.

On the other hand, taxi was the fastest vehicle with only 9 minutes of getting to main city. Whereas taxi was the most expensive vehicle that cost 1,8 pounds sterling. For people who find the fastest transportation, taxi becomes a choice even it was expensive.

Moreover, car was the second ranked that cost 1 pound sterling and took 5 minutes longer after improvements, from 10 to 15 minutes. Furthermore, the tram was the third rank of transportation that increased dramatically from 22 to 16 minutes with cost only 0,5 pounds sterling.

To sum up, improvements triggered a better change to the transport network. After all, the government served a better life to people who find comfortable and affordable transportation with the fastest time.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (3 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2013-12-02 avista_nada 67 view
Essay Categories
Essays by user avista_nada :

Comments

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 176 200
No. of Characters: 878 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.989 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.786 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.398 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.438 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.779 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4