The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summirise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the expenditure on various things in five different countries in 2002.
As we can see,the great food supplies spender is Turkey( 32.14%) when Sweden shows hisself as the smallest one(15.77%). And Italy, Spain and Ireland are in the middle(16.36%;18.80%;28.91%).
By the way, Italy has the biggest intrest in apparel(9.00%) whereas Sweden does not demonstrate a lot of intrest again (5.40%).Ireland,Spain and Turkey share almost equal percentage(6.43%;6.51%;6.63%).
In fact,Turkey is the first consumer in 'leisure and education'(4.35%)but Spain is the last (1.98%).Sweden,Italy and Ireland occupy the middle position (3.22%;3.20%;2.21%).
Actually,all the countries pay a lot of attention to the food stuff( around more than 15%) when 'leisure and education' take only the last place (approximetly no more than 4.5%).
Overall,we can notice that different countries have various views in consumption in 2002.
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