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Today more and more young children have electronic gadgets such as computers and mobile phones. Some people say that this is a positive development.
Over recent years, science and technology has emerged far way beyond the reach than expected with inventions like the PC and cellular phones. These inventions have created a huge impact in (deleted - the) society, especially with young children. Even though, some people believe that this is a good development for children. Let us discuss more towards the positive development.
Firstly, computers are already the latest trend and are used by almost all organisation, institutions and company's. The entire world is dependent on computers, as a result growing students are encouraged to bu...
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science and technology has emerged far way beyond the reach than expected
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Sentence: Firstly, computers are already the latest trend and are used by almost all organisation, institutions and company's. The entire world is dependent on computers, as a result growing students are encouraged to buy a computer.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization
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Don't repeat words, phrase or sentences. Like 'Not only...but also'
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