Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets. Some people say that this money should be spent on the people who are starving. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's society, especially in modern countries, many households would spend their fortune on pets. Some argue that this money can be used for charity insread. In this essay, I would like to give my perspective on this topic.
Pets like dogs, cats, rabbit and many others in wealthy families are often treated really well as if hey are human, and the breadwinner of the house is more than happy to spend their income on this little ones. In my opinion, this is because pets are so lovable and some, like dogs, give good companionship to the owners. This is well accepted by the lonely elders in ...
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Sentence: I am not saying that having pets in the households are againts humanity, but I agree that, to some extent, too much money is spent on them for their toys, luxury food, shelter, etc. as if they are human babies.
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