The traditional lifestyle of developing countries has been attracting an increasing number of tourists. As a side effect, this has been preventing the people in developing countries from adopting modern ways of living. Do you agree or disagree with the st

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The traditional lifestyle of developing countries has been attracting an increasing number of tourists. As a side effect, this has been preventing the people in developing countries from adopting modern ways of living. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and examples from personal experience.

Due to effect of globalization, nowadays we may conveniently travel to other countries to experience new cultures and new customs. Capture this trend; developing countries have been constantly developing different types of tourism, which combine with traditional culture. Indeed, they have received many value profits from this idea. However, this also causes negative effects. In this topic, I would like to examine this question from both sides.

On one side of the argument there are people who argue that benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantage. The main reason for believing is the...

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