University education should be free. Do you agree or disagree? Why? Use examples and reason to develop your argument?
It is true that high level have to free. I believe this statement.
Some people think that they need to learn to have good knowledge. As a result, they need to study. On the contrary, current situation becomes barrier to have good education. What has changed is some of them cannot even continue their study in the high level. Moreover, they are hard to get good job which need professional skills.
After I finished study in senior high school, I do not know whether or not I continue my study in university. I just want to work after finished study in senior high school because I have many experience in senior high school. I watched television, which show information about some people have trouble with searching job and problems in the last education. After watching their information in television, I’m worried if I do not join study in university, I do not get job and not have money for my self.
As we know, vocational school provides much knowledge and chance to improve skills, because they practice more in learning about vocational than such as engineer and other subjects, which could easy get jobs. Some companies are needed employers, who graduate from high schools. Others think if someone wants to more easy get good jobs, then they have to find certificated in high level.
In conclusion, they believe that study in high level not only gets much knowledge, but also gets additional their quality characters. And when they are graduated from university, students find certificates, which have function to get jobs.
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