We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business,
hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the
future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious
of their benefits?
The role of computers constitute a large proportion of human lives. Since inception, it has been growing in terms of usage which is visible in the aplication of computers over a wide range of sectors. With the way it is penetrating into automation leading to more output in less time, it seems computer will achieve new heights going forward. Whether this dependency is profitable for human society, is a highly contentious topic and conclusion on this would be achieved through proper analysis.
In a fast growing civilisation where there is race in improvising technology, it is more likely that need for computers would grow in times ahead. For instance, scientists around the world are doing extreme research in space technology which is pretty much i its earlier stages at this moment. Computers is a necessity and would be increasing more in its use of developing means of exploring the infinity which would otherwise be impossible for human beings to achieve. Thus it how new inventions would be welcoming more computer applications in future.
At the same time, it is very much require to excercise control over usage of compters. For example, numerous nuclear devices are being built and countries like America are spending billions of dollars on this. As it is obvious that these researches are made with the aid of computers, these can be harmful if this devices are used on human beings, particulary in war conflicts between nations. So we need of what these devices may achieve.
In conclusion,it can be said that overall growth can be influenced with all the good outcome computers are going to offer in the future. Along with this we need to keep an watchful eye in eliminating harmful effect due to excessive applications of computers.
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