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What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Modern lifestyle and economical growth has made metropolitan as the most preferable choice of living. On the other side, rural areas are still deprived of various economical and social problems. In this essay, I will contend the major advantages of urban life while enlisting the dark side of rural area together with solutions.
Urbanization provides better education and employment options to help people to touch the skies of success. For example, Kalpna Chawla, a famous astronaut, moved from county to big city Mumbai, India to get better education and work opportunity. Later, due to her abi...
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Sentence: The higher education, employment and better health is always being both the problem and solution in rural areas to bring it into equal weightage of city areas.
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Modern lifestyle and economical growth has made metropolitan as the most preferable choice of living.
Modern lifestyle and economical growth have made metropolitan the most preferable choice of living.
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