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What are the threats to environment in the present times ? What can individual and government do to prevent such abuses to nature ?
In the recent time there is a vast improvement in the field of technology and industrial areas. New factories is being built-up for development. But simultaneously we are also damaging the environment and disturbing the cycle of ecosystem.
Firstly, the modern industries is one of the biggest threat. As the industries use to pollute the air by polluting some toxic substances. So due to these people who's residence is near by factories may suffer from illness. Even adults may suffer more from the polluted air, as they have weaker immune system and they can also suffer from breathing problem t...
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Sentence: Firstly, the modern industries is one of the biggest threat.
Description: The fragment the modern industries is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: To sum up, It's a individual job to protect the environment.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a
Suggestion: Refer to It's and a
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No. of Words: 243 350
No. of Characters: 1166 1500
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.294 21.0
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 243 350
No. of Characters: 1166 1500
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.948 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.798 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.724 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.294 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.433 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5