When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Does technology kill traditional skills? While some people say that the development of technology adversely affects to the traditional way of life, I strongly believe that both technology and traditional skills are hand in hand help people. They bring huge positive benefits in many aspect of life in their own ways.
In office, the invention of computer helps workers in typing their duties. A secretary could finish his report faster by using computer instead of writing. An architect able to design and edit his design easily if he draws it on related soft-ware instead of using paper. However, technology stuffs have limitation in certain cases. For instance, a report should be checked accurately by human instead of machine.
In term of farm, technology also plays important roles. Farmers uses tractor to cultivate their lands. It helps them easier and faster in growing plant. Nevertheless, some tasks in farmland also only can be done by human. For example, to spread the seeds of grain, maintain irrigation, and so on.
Regarding to transportation, the invention of plane definitely contribute a lot to human’s activity. Plane helps us to reach a place faster. It delivers our goods such as letter, package, and so on quicker than it transported by people even bus or land transportation. Even thought, the role of human should not be ignored. To mail a letter to one’s home, we need human worker to read address.
In conclusion, human traditional skills and technology cannot be separated each other. Technology need human and vice versa. A person will not be able to complete a task perfectly if he relies on technology stuff absolutely. Therefore, put traditional skills and technology tools in exact place on the right time are the forefront solution to this problem ever.
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Sentence: Farmers uses tractor to cultivate their lands.
Description: The fragment Farmers uses tractor is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace uses with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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