In contemporary society, there has been a controversial issue in regards to whether or not capital penalty should be applied in the legal system. Many people insist on the view that it can control violence and crimes effectively. As far as I am concerned, I believe this should depend on different circumstances in each nation, and I will justify my reasons below.
Firstly, the death penalty is necessary in some developing countries. As lack of necessities in these nations, there is a large proportion of people being confronted with chronic poverty and starving, which would cause severe offen...
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