Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
- Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
The table gives information about how many hours of inhabitant spend free time according by inhabitant aged group and several their activities to spend their free time.
According to the table, teens and over 70s aged spend lots of their free time to watch television or video, maybe because they have fewer activities. Inhabitants 30s spend 300 an hour of free time to socialize with four or less people and inhabitants 20s have fewer in 150 an hours per years to socialize with 4 or less people.
In one hand, inhabitants in 50s, 60s, and over 70s are use fewer hours to socialize with 4 or more people just 25 an hours per year. In comparison, people 30s and 40s spend 200 hours to individual exercise, maybe it is 30s and 40s are productive aged. Teens use their 100 hours per years to watch cinema, but people 50s just 50 hours for a years to go to cinema.
The interestingly are people 60s and over 70s did not spend their time to group exercise or sport, perhaps it is because group exercise and sport is hard to do them.
Overall, watching television and video is the most favorite activity to spend people free time. However cinema is expensive activity so, cinema become the fewest to inhabitant spend their leisure time.
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Sentence: The table gives information about how many hours of inhabitant spend free time according by inhabitant aged group and several their activities to spend their free time.
Description: The fragment inhabitant aged group is rare
Description: A determiner/pronoun, post-determiner is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to several and their
Sentence: According to the table, teens and over 70s aged spend lots of their free time to watch television or video, maybe because they have fewer activities.
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to aged and spend
maybe it is 30s and 40s are productive aged.
Description: two verbs in one sentence.
flaws:
Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 220 200
No. of Characters: 988 1000
No. of Different Words: 100 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.491 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.379 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.002 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.473 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.775 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.196 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4