Write a thank you letter to the public transport authority about the manager who helped you to find something you lost and say
- What did you lose?
- Why was it so important to you?
- How did the manager help you find it?
Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter to thank you for helping me for finding the most precious thing to me. My engagement ring, which I lost while I was busy with my phone call with my best friend.
It was very important to me because my husband gave it to me 10 years ago when we were engaged to each other, which were happiest times in my life. However, I felt too paranoid and anxious when my ring was lost but thanks to mister manager for helping me to find it.
When I called the manager, he came and asked me for the bus's license which I took the last.
And then, he went to that bus and ...
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which were happiest times in my life.
Sentence: which were the happiest times in my life.
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No. of Words: 181 200
No. of Characters: 714 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.668 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.945 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.963 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 25 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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