You are about to star social-meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:
• What activities you have to planned
• When the first meeting takes place and where
I am Wakalanud, chairmen of organizing committee of international seminar which is would attend speaker from several countries. We would thankful if you r newspaper could create an announcement about our activity to invite citizen in this city to join in this agenda.
The theme this seminar is ‘Several Ways to Get Scholarship’ which has many heads of university from overseas to explain this theme according to their country. I hope from this seminar would change mindset viewers to continue their study in abroad because they would explain also about culture which include weather and habit of society.
Before do this job, we must meeting first with the other member and organizing committee. This is the first meeting for us, thus, I think this meeting is significant. The first meeting on 20th July 2013 at Gedung Nattiro Mata and would talk about preparation and job from every part of organizing committee.
Thanks for your attention.
Your faithfully
Wakalanud
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Sentence: I am Wakalanud, chairmen of organizing committee of international seminar which is would attend speaker from several countries.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and would
Sentence: We would thankful if you r newspaper could create an announcement about our activity to invite citizen in this city to join in this agenda.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to would and thankful
Sentence: Before do this job, we must meeting first with the other member and organizing committee.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to must and meeting
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