You are a gift shopkeeper. Write a letter to your supplier, to let him know that you won't need the merchandise you have ordered. Explain your situation and suggest a solution.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am an employee of Proma Gift Shop. I regard to inform you I would like to cancel my order for twenty Teddy bear dolls.
Last month, I made an order to buy twenty boxes of glasses form your store. These dolls supposed to use in a hospital charity. Last day, I had a phone call from manager of charity. He said me that unfortunately, they had to cancel the charity because of some unexpected reason. Consequently, I do not need these Teddy bear any more and I have to cancel my order.
I would like to ask you to refund the 60$ down payment I made. Because of the inconvenience this possible caused you, you may deduct 5% of value from the original amount that I paid.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
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