You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
- explain the reason why you decline the offer
- express your gratitude
- explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Mr Paul Moh,
I would like to convey my appreciation for offering me the position of assistant accountant at Bermuda Company Limited. I am particularly pleased to have been selected out of 300 potential candidates.
This is why I am declining the aforementioned offer with great regret. I have recently been promoted as an accountant at my current firm and will be assigned to both the taxation and audit department instead of focusing solely on the latter as I was previously doing or was set to do by joining your firm.
Despite the additional responsibilities attached to my new role, I...
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