You have seen a job advertisement in some newspaper. Write a letter to your friend asking him to consider this job. Please say
- Where have you seen the ad?
- What is the job description?
- Why do you think, he is a suitable candidate for it?
Dear Mike,
I hope this letter finds you well. I write this letter to inform you about a job vacancy in HTC company.
As I remember in your previous letter you mentioned that you were unemployed. Yesterday while I was surfing the net I saw an advertisement in the net. It was about a job vacancy in a well-known company with good reputation. They need a programmer and a Database administrator for their IT department who knows SQL Server 2008, Oracle, C# and so on. In addition the candidate should have 5 years of experiences. Besides, a recommendation letter from the previous company is required as well.
Since we were colleagues for 2 years I know about your skills and qualifications so I think this job really suits you. Moreover, I guess working in this company seems appealing for everyone.
Please let me know if you want to send your CV or not.
Best regards,
Rahi
- Your friend recently had a new baby born and you have bought him her a present Write a letter and say What is the present Why did you choose it Arrange a visit to pass on the present and see the baby 90
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 87
- In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? 40
- You rented a car recently but were not satisfied with it Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what went wrong with the car you rented Ask for some form of compensation 87
- You recently went to Australia for a holiday However your return flight was delayed by a day Write a letter to the airline company In your letter Introduce yourself Complain about the delay Explain the problems that it caused you Ask for a letter of apolo 88
Sentence: Since we were colleagues for 2 years I know about your skills and qualifications so I think this job really suits you.
Description: The word suits is not usually used as a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to suits
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 151 200
No. of Characters: 675 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.47 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.861 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.35 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.602 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.157 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4