You recently had your computer fixed at the local computer store however you are not pleased with
the service you received.
Write a letter to the store manager.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to your store “72 Computer Store”. I would to express my dissatisfaction with service from your store.
I am actually one of customer, I always bring my laptop to your store if I have mistake with my laptop, and I usually acquire satisfy with services from your store.
However, one week ago my laptop has problem, camera exactly, so I bring my laptop to create my laptop back to normal. My main problem is one of your employers telling me that my laptop would finish after three days, but until one week my laptop finish yet.
As the mistake was caused by your store, I hope that you would bestow compensate for the cost. Without my laptop I could not finish my duty from my office.
I am looking forward to hearing for you soon.
Yours faithfully
Johan Stewart
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No. of Words: 140 200 (minimum 150 words)
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 140 200
No. of Characters: 592 1000
No. of Different Words: 78 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.44 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.229 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.266 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 3 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.599 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.554 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.847 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.312 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4