You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realize there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company
-explain why you took the job
-describe the problems that you experienced
suggest that what could be done about that
Dear Mr. Ivan,
My name is Matthew, who works as a part-time data analyst in the Customer Service Department in IBM Corporation. I am writing with regards to some problems I have been confronted with recently.
The reason why I chose this job is that my major at university is Business Information System, and one of the most important studies in my subject is data analyzing. I learnt from the newspaper a few weeks ago that a job vacancy had been released by your company which was exactly what I needed. Therefore, I have been hired since 14th March this year.
There is a problem with the ...
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