You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
write at least 150 words.
You do not need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear..............
You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead.
Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
explain the situation and why you cannot continue the course
say what you would like to do about your studies
ask for advice about what you can do about the situation?
Respected sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that i am unable to continue my evening course that i have enrolled because my biology Olympiad is next month and i need to prepare myself for it but with this evening course, I have become very busy and i am unable to concentrate on my studies and Olympiad both.
Therefore, i want to take this course in the next term. You ca n teach me extra in the morning time so that i will be able to do both my studies and preparation together. i want your help in this situation, what do you suggest i do about this problem. Please tell me soon.
yours obediently,
Gireesha Sharma
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Sentence: You ca n teach me extra in the morning time so that i will be able to do both my studies and preparation together. i want your help in this situation, what do you suggest i do about this problem.
Error: ca n Suggestion: can
flaws:
No. of Words: 114 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 4 9
No. of Words: 114 200
No. of Characters: 456 900
No. of Different Words: 70 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.268 3.7
Average Word Length: 4 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.267 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 29 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 20 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 9 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.187 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.536 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.673 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.215 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4