You will have to undergo a minor surgical procedure and you will not be able to do your job in full. Write to your manager
- Explain about the operation.
- Say what part of the job you will not be able to do.
- Suggest a solution to this situation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I cannot be able do my whole duties from 21 of April until 29 April.
I have felt a pain in my right hand since two months ago. After a full checkup, my doctor said to me I have to do a surgery on my right hand because there is a small gland on my hand. He said that after surgery I will not able use my right hand at least for 10 days. Therefore, I think after surgery I cannot impalement code with my hand. However, I still able to participant in Analyze meeting and manage people in my section.
I am very sorry for this inconvenience matter. I believe the ideal solution for covering my disability during this time is I stay overtime after my recovery. Besides, I can work in weekend too. In addition, I can speak with another programmer in my section and ask her to complete some codes of mine.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
M. Min.
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Sentence: I believe the ideal solution for covering my disability during this time is I stay overtime after my recovery.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and I
my doctor said to me
my doctor told me
Sentence: Therefore, I think after surgery I cannot impalement code with my hand.
Error: impalement Suggestion: implement
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 169 350
No. of Characters: 688 1500
No. of Different Words: 103 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.071 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.39 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.442 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.46 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.672 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.236 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5