Apple cannning process
The diagram shows a process of making an apple canning. Apple canning is one of many fruits canning in the world. The following is the process of making canned apple.
Canned apple manufacture is divided into long process. It is start from process hand picking in the plantation by farmer until dispatch to various sellers.
The first process is done in the plantation apple. Farmer is doing selection of apple witch good quality and they are taking by hand picking. Then, truck carrier apple comes to transporting apples for Carrie to the factory. The next stage, all of apples undergo is washing process and then is selecting process one by one for quality. After that, cold storing process and then enter to be weighing. After weighing all of apples is peeled and then is sliced. Apples id Slicing with the same shape size pieces. The next process is canning.
All of apple canning is sealed and then is cooked for sterilizing from bacteria. After that, is labeling. In each can of apple is labelled by printing machine special for canning food. After that, all of the can is entered into storage. And the end of all process is dispatching.
In conclude, all of the long process of canning apple is assured the quality of apples and assure of the taste of apples.
Canned apple manufacture is divided into long process.
Canned apple manufacture is divided into a long process.
It is start from
It starts from
truck carrier apple comes to transporting apples for Carrie to the factory
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Sentence: Farmer is doing selection of apple witch good quality and they are taking by hand picking.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to witch and good
Sentence: The next stage, all of apples undergo is washing process and then is selecting process one by one for quality.
Description: The fragment apples undergo is is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace undergo with verb, past participle
Sentence: In conclude, all of the long process of canning apple is assured the quality of apples and assure of the taste of apples.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to In and conclude
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