The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about graduate unemployment between two years split into 6-month periods in one region of Europe. According to the data given by the bar chart, it can be clearly seen that there is a fluctuating upward trend overall and the unemployed male population is likely to be twice higher than female.
Having an analysis by the level of percentage, the highest proportion is recorded in 2009 while the lowest one in the previous year. Since January 2008 until July 2008, there had been a slight fall in the number of unemployed people, only from 10% to 7% by men and 7% to 3...
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